#529. walk before bed

January 20, 2012

off season
the river and the moon
paint me in night in chill wind chime
out on the pier thrusts my walking mind
upon the harbor one ghost sail raised for home
the planks the pilings the broken tangled gear weathered 
seen off through gathering fog by myself and the golden hound

4 Responses to “#529. walk before bed”

  1. Sara said

    Great visual.

  2. slpmartin said

    Indeed excellent imagery as Sara notes.

  3. Vivid imagery. Perfectly so.

  4. Evelyn said

    this has a lovely shape.

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