#456. belief?

January 21, 2011

time is caught
in my head
is caught in time
the heart too
is pulled strung
to then now
from wild soon

fire a kiln burn beautiful
air scented by wood and water
earth blooms constantly returns all home

6 Responses to “#456. belief?”

  1. Evelyn said

    “caught in time
    the heart too
    is pulled strung”

    Wow. that is gorgeous

    “wild soon
    fire a kiln burn beautiful
    air”
    wild, fire, kiln, beautiful, air
    love the word choices…

  2. ebbtide said

    I love how that last line just nails the whole circular theme. Wonderful!

  3. Marian said

    constant returning. it all comes round.
    i’ve come back a couple times to read this one. thanks.

  4. hames1977 said

    i love the image of the kiln burning beautiful like a mythology of man’s beginning in the creation. we will all return to where we came from. great thought indeed.

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