#455. travelling

January 14, 2011

part
of heart beat
time is machined
into the blood flesh
moment pushed up behind 
the first last dream put to rest

tossing about the pillow wakes me now

the details of a vision are the least important

2 Responses to “#455. travelling”

  1. Evelyn said

    I like this one better than the last two.
    this has that something special in it that I felt the last two were lacking. almost like your heart or passion wasnt in it…
    ” part
    of heart beat
    time is machined”
    This is hard hitting and so unique.
    This one speaks to me.

    “the details of a vision are the least important”
    I am very intrigued by this line…

  2. slpmartin said

    Love that last line!

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