#454. another ghost of new york

January 12, 2011

in the great alone
stuck deep in the thousand eyes
of subway trains
the heart of life
moving high in one pair of eyes
in the great alone

4 Responses to “#454. another ghost of new york”

  1. slpmartin said

    This is just a marvelous poem the picture you create is just brilliant.

  2. Evelyn said

    I like the shape of it, the use if similar lines and the repetition of the first line at the end making it a mirror of itself.

  3. Wow…this one really makes you think…I agree with Charlie…just brilliant!! oxo

  4. hames1977 said

    i like this poem’s structure and form, reminds me of my poem “great divide”. same sentiment but i like the loneliness one feels when he is in the crowd. great write!

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