#427. hypnogogic reverie one

November 10, 2010

is not as much fun
as creating
a new moment
of laughter

i can see your dancing eyes
when i close mine

3 Responses to “#427. hypnogogic reverie one”

  1. Evelyn said

    I love love this
    cant explain, the moment is very clear, thats all…

  2. slpmartin said

    What a fantastic poem to read this morning…you really have expressed the joy of that moment so very well…bravo!

  3. SO good. two perfect bites.

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