#419. past holy weekend

November 1, 2010

connected by beautiful smoke
wisps between the dimensions
all the ghosts occupied at living
before dying simultaneously time
in time a delicate constant dancing
each with all the others steps and songs 

10 Responses to “#419. past holy weekend”

  1. Im so happy to meet you here in the blog world through Jingle Poetry…This is a stunning poem…it has that sense of something mysterious and beautiful…and any time you try to touch it… it is just out of reach…

    Lovely!
    Annie

    http://itslovelyannie.com/2010/11/01/we-dream-on/

  2. Shashi said

    Very interesting, Zevstar.. I liked it.. thanks.. for sharing..

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya

  3. Shashi said

    Its beautiful. I like the imagery here…very apt for the occasion…

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya

  4. Jingle said

    stunning imagery,
    well done.

  5. xseverinx said

    the arrangement of the words dance, as do the words themselves.

  6. Shashi said

    Enjoyed it again through “Thursday Poets rally” too.

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya

  7. SHORT BUT CAPTIVATING.

  8. Evelyn said

    “all the ghosts occupied at living
    before dying simultaneously”
    Can you be living and be a ghost already?
    You make me think you know something the rest of us don’t, your poems…

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