#391. soul whisper taffy

September 22, 2010

sleep comes

dreams with all
their lovely strength
and dangerous power
tantalize the unconcious
mind and stretch deep tendrils

sleep comes

4 Responses to “#391. soul whisper taffy”

  1. slpmartin said

    This is just gorgeous…I love the way the words flow in the poem.

  2. Rich said

    Love it as it reminds me of my last night’s drift into slumber.

  3. Evelyn said

    This feels incredibly close to home for me.
    Uncomfortably so…

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