#387. traveller

September 18, 2010

if i
wait
or not
vibrating
time moves
me out of now
at the speed my
synapses fire off at
the same rate as i die

redeemed by the eyes of my lover
my own eyes close and cry
and time means naught

in truth i live
in fact i die

4 Responses to “#387. traveller”

  1. slpmartin said

    Wow…just a brilliant poem….this one really struck me since several people I cared about have die recently…makes one appreciate the time they have.

  2. Evelyn said

    “in truth i live
    in fact i die”
    Wow. so few words so packed with consequences.

  3. zevstar said

    one of my personal favorites. time death love. is there a difference?

  4. Evelyn said

    Can’t resist forward motion, its just gravity.

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