#377. no place like it (ldw4

September 6, 2010

the crowds
and kids are gone home
the rivers run singing quietly
the city’s spirits rattle
echo down worn hot
cobblestone mazes
and cool rooms
call me to my
sweet bed
and you

4 Responses to “#377. no place like it (ldw4”

  1. slpmartin said

    Like the way the shape of the poem lead to the last line…very enjoyable poem.

  2. gregbrown said

    just feel all awwwwww. . . . also adding to blog roll.

  3. Chloe said

    A lovely poem – I’ve added you to my blogroll called “Circle of Friends”

    Have a good day,
    Chloe xx

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