#372. manhattan underground like water

September 1, 2010

the ancient
timeless whirlpool
tossing me
an old coca cola can
in an empty
six train car between canal
and spring
before summer and fall leads to winter

4 Responses to “#372. manhattan underground like water”

  1. slpmartin said

    I recall riding the trains when they were fairly empty one day on my way to my brother home…and I felt just like what you present in this poem…wow..you really nailed that experience.

  2. Evelyn said

    this title is wonderful.

  3. zevstar said

    i like this title too

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out /  Change )

Google photo

You are commenting using your Google account. Log Out /  Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )

Connecting to %s

%d bloggers like this: