#370. loose ends

August 30, 2010

a wierd week
before labor day
quiet in manhattan
the heat is back now
and everyone wants ice
or was that ninety years ago
when the spirits and shades knew
that reality was a confidence game

2 Responses to “#370. loose ends”

  1. slpmartin said

    The last line was dynamite…so much of what we think is ‘reality’ is based upon a confidence game…you’ve hit the mark with this poem.

  2. Evelyn said

    I love this.
    its like I can picture manhattan aging, everyone wants ice…

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