#362. cool hand

August 22, 2010

my mind
is still not right
luke

stand in the rain
with you
it’s just rain

your ditch
boss our dirt
our dark death

we understand
each other
all right

One Response to “#362. cool hand”

  1. slpmartin said

    Wow…you brought back scenes from that movie that were so vivid and the layer of meaning that you added was very impressive.

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