#361. working man

August 21, 2010

saw a young friend
grow old tonight
the spark in his eye
dimmed swagger
gone i want to weep

for who

7 Responses to “#361. working man”

  1. slpmartin said

    Almost seem to suggest by the ending that you saw a bit of the other person in you….well but don’t we all.

  2. Chloe said

    Hi there – I came over from slpmartin’s blog…and look forward to reading more of your work soon.

    Chloe 😀 xx

  3. Evelyn said

    Slow change or drastic shift?
    What’s worse?

  4. zevstar said

    worse or better? not a judgment that i feel qualified to make.

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