#359. making silence echo

August 19, 2010

making silence echo

restrained hesitation just before
the next tango step
light jingling through ice cubes
a hundred glasses
raised in hot sharp conversations
are taken outside
to the ancient cobblestone streets
the humid night
bright eyes then hands lips bodies
making silence echo

4 Responses to “#359. making silence echo”

  1. slpmartin said

    You’ve created another wonderful scene with your words.

  2. Evelyn said

    “Ancient cobblestone streets”
    Really like this image

  3. zevstar said

    thanks. i like the title line here

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