#344. when hate rhymes with hot

August 4, 2010

clearly
august in manhattan
is not

just hot
alot

and moist
but not the good moist

my puppy is lying on the cool floor
she knows whats
what

3 Responses to “#344. when hate rhymes with hot”

  1. slpmartin said

    Seems like you east coast summer has been like the ones we usually have..but this year much cooler…enjoyed your poem.

  2. Evelyn said

    “my puppy is lying on the cool floor
    she knows whats
    what ”
    I like it when you are soft

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