#340. last night of july at coney

July 31, 2010

enter the palest
fragile autumn breeze
summer briefly visits its end
at the top of the rollercoaster
a pause

5 Responses to “#340. last night of july at coney”

  1. slpmartin said

    Given that I have Acrophobia…there is little chance that I shall ever expereince that pause at the top…but shall take your word about how it feels.;-)

  2. Zevstar said

    No worries. I love heights enuff for everyone!

  3. What a great way to bring July to a close. One of the most exhilarating parts of the roller coaster, just when the clicks have stopped and gravity pulls the breath out of your lungs! Fun read!!

  4. I love how you play with the length of the lines to create a picture mirroring the poem.
    its playful and makes your poems distinctive

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