#285. more ghosts of new york

June 6, 2010

finding myself crashing
almost every day shouldering
through the spirits crowding
in the subway skating in the park
wailing in the bar walking across town
i am overwhelmed by the presence of endless
time and the many flavored ghosts of new york

joining the line i am content
to know my view of the river
changes daily

5 Responses to “#285. more ghosts of new york”

  1. I love the way your poem flows effortlessly. Silently weaving your way through the many avenues of NY…nice

  2. slpmartin said

    When I consider NYC, I can imagine the ghosts that must wander those streets and the stories they could tell….another well crafted poem.

  3. zevstar said

    thanks for your thoughts…its nice to get the feedback

  4. Evelyn said

    this is very lovely, really fleshes out a picture

  5. “finding myself crashing
    almost every day”
    and also
    “i am overwhelmed by the presence of endless
    time”
    and lastly
    “joining the line i am content
    to know my view of the river
    changes daily”

    like I said, second reading on some of these reveals so much more beauty

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