#258. now the line

May 10, 2010

now
the line
stretches
between you
then me now we
see the wave grown
from our time together
where ever that exists now

4 Responses to “#258. now the line”

  1. slpmartin said

    Love how te structure of the poem adds to its overall meeaning…well said.

  2. ebbtide said

    this is wonderful… like slpmartin says – the structure lends credence to the message

  3. Hey Z’ev and Sharon,

    A fitting poem for Monday past, a day which left me bereaving my dear Cali.
    She is free and we are left behind to wait the time and space to see her, feel her soft warm fur, and hold her so closely that no more space can be between us anymore.

    lauren

  4. “see the wave grown
    from our time together
    where ever that exists now”
    exists now…or then…

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