#236. rinsed and drained

April 18, 2010

i wish
that there
were
more of me
that
space and time
allowed
it
but what is
is not
the wish
fulfilled
but still
the Endless
holds you
for me

2 Responses to “#236. rinsed and drained”

  1. “but still
    the Endless
    holds you
    for me ”
    beautiful, longing…

  2. rereading this one once again, it is very packed, and again, I didnt realize it.
    “i wish
    that there
    were
    more of me
    that
    space and time
    allowed”
    so more of you meaning a longer life, or a different life?

    “but what is
    is not
    the wish
    fulfilled”
    love this part also.
    this might be my new favorite.
    but I say that about all of them, I guess.

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