#27. In the evening

September 22, 2009

In the evening

evening evening
out
close dusk air
somehow makes me
aware of how much
how difficult
how long
you will
be gone gone gone
and just
how sweet your return
will could be
if I just remember how you we are
In the evening
evening evening.

2 Responses to “#27. In the evening”

  1. see? gush.
    Love how the repetition makes it seem like a song

  2. zevstar said

    that’s lyrical poetry

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